People seemed surprised that I was the one who had been attacked." Waste of Space, chapter 18, page 261 There were a few hushed gasps over the radio. I don't think it was very realistic that Nina would do that. In my opinion, I don't think it's possible for a twelve-year-old, oh sorry, a thirteen-year-old to solve mysteries before professional NASA scientists could. Before, Dash just butted in with any help and managed to solve each mystery. In this book, Nina actually asks him for help. It just gives him more attention, to the attention that he already has. I feel like Stuart Gibbs is trying to make that a flaw, but it actually isn't. Have you noticed that? Out of all Moonies, he is the one that gets targeted in each book. Who needs nine o's in one word? Or four exclamation marks? I'm not a very experienced writer, but if I had written this book, I would have fixed the first quote to say "'Why not?' Violet would whine, stretching out the words to prove her exasperation." Or something like that. I hate to see all of those extra letters in a professional, published book. There was only one person at MBA who ever made a sound like that: Lars Sjoberg."Waste of Space, chapter 11, page 169 It sounded like it had to come from the other side of MBA, but was loud enough to echo throughout the base. "Suddenly there was a howl of rage outside the room. There's nothing to do on the moon.'" Waste of Space, chapter one, page five "'Whyyyyyy nooooooooot?' Violet would whine. When he put in extra letters to show that someone was stretching out the word.
Also, there may be a few spoilers, so be warned when reading.ġ. Please don't take any of my comments as hate, these are just me commenting on the book as a reader. I mean, he can write books, but it isn't very well written. Maybe I just didn't how terrible the writing was in previous books, or Stuart Gibbs suddenly lost his writing ability. In my honest opinion, this wasn't very well written.
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